"Weeeeeee that was fun, let’s go again."
Two girls named Emily and Lilly were having a swim the loved going down the pink poked dotted slide.
Lilly and Emily have been best friends since preschool.
Lilly lived in New York but Emily lived in New Zealand so they only see each other once every two years. Lilly’s age is 10 and Emily is 9 but they don't mind about age difference. Lilly is very rich but Emily is average. Their Mum said that they had to go so they raced down the slide one more time.
THEN BAM they slid through a portal. When they jumped up the could see fields of lollies it was a dream come true.
They said. "WOW"
Then they heard rustling in the bush.
"What was that?"
"BOO"
A girl with long silk hair jumped out of the bush.
"AAAAAAAAHHHHH
"Ha ha ha ha ha ha."
"That’s a good laugh."
Her name was Katelyn she was pretty and funny.
"Where are we?"
"Well you’re in Wonder Land."
They were very scared. They had no idea how to get back.
Now they were so so so afraid.
"WWWW What about my fffffff family." "What about your family?"
"OOOOO doesn’t matter." They walked with Katelyn for a long long time till they came to a purple cave.
Katelyn said this is where I live.
“So how do we get back?”
“Well I can help you get back.”
Emily and Lilly were so happy until an evil dragon come in.
“Let’s go .”
They ran and ran and ran in till they fell into the portal.
When they found their way back through the portal they were so relieved. Week 5 writing focus; using the 5 senses
It was a bright day in coco land you could smell the coco beans on the tree and could hear the feet of the coco bean pickers. “To bad I have to leave on this lovely day” said Sally. To her Mum and Dad. Sally was going on a boating trip. When she was leaving her Mum and Dad started to cry. Bye Mum Bye Dad, said Sally. When Sally was all the way out to sea it got real ruff. But when you thought it could not get any worse it did…… When Sally woke up she saw a girl standing above her…….
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Jess
A trip to Wonder Land
"Weeeeeee that was fun, let’s go again."
Two girls named Emily and Lilly were having a swim the loved going down the pink poked dotted slide.
Lilly and Emily have been best friends since preschool.
Lilly lived in New York but Emily lived in New Zealand so they only see each other once every two years. Lilly’s age is 10 and Emily is 9 but they don't mind about age difference. Lilly is very rich but Emily is average. Their Mum said that they had to go so they raced down the slide one more time.
THEN BAM they slid through a portal. When they jumped up the could see fields of lollies it was a dream come true.
They said. "WOW"
Then they heard rustling in the bush.
"What was that?"
"BOO"
A girl with long silk hair jumped out of the bush.
"AAAAAAAAHHHHH
"Ha ha ha ha ha ha."
"That’s a good laugh."
Her name was Katelyn she was pretty and funny.
"Where are we?"
"Well you’re in Wonder Land."
They were very scared. They had no idea how to get back.
Now they were so so so afraid.
"WWWW What about my fffffff family."
"What about your family?"
"OOOOO doesn’t matter."
They walked with Katelyn for a long long time till they came to a purple cave.
Katelyn said this is where I live.
“So how do we get back?”
“Well I can help you get back.”
Emily and Lilly were so happy until an evil dragon come in.
“Let’s go .”
They ran and ran and ran in till they fell into the portal.
When they found their way back through the portal they were so relieved. Week 5 writing focus; using the 5 senses
It was a bright day in coco land you could smell the coco beans on the tree and could hear the feet of the coco bean pickers. “To bad I have to leave on this lovely day” said Sally. To her Mum and Dad. Sally was going on a boating trip. When she was leaving her Mum and Dad started to cry. Bye Mum Bye Dad, said Sally. When Sally was all the way out to sea it got real ruff. But when you thought it could not get any worse it did…… When Sally woke up she saw a girl standing above her…….